{"id":2019,"date":"2009-11-18T11:17:17","date_gmt":"2009-11-18T17:17:17","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/?p=2019"},"modified":"2009-11-19T15:29:38","modified_gmt":"2009-11-19T21:29:38","slug":"nanowrimo-bang-with-ninjas","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/index.php\/2009\/11\/nanowrimo-bang-with-ninjas\/","title":{"rendered":"#NaNoWriMo: Bang! (with Ninjas)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>So here we are. Week Three, innit it? Bit of pain in the ass, this one. Some folks call it the <a href=\"http:\/\/www.nanowrimo.org\/eng\/node%252F3447232\">wasteland<\/a>. Some call it the <a href=\"http:\/\/terribleminds.com\/ramble\/2009\/08\/31\/free-advice-writing-whilst-in-the-weeds\/\">weeds<\/a>.<\/p>\n<p><strong><em>I<\/em><\/strong> call it dirty things you wouldn&#8217;t call your wife, unless it was the Special &#8220;Diceless Roleplay&#8221; Weekend.<\/p>\n<p>Too much info? Right, moving on.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;d be easy for me to say you&#8217;re stuck, but it&#8217;s also not quite right. You&#8217;re flailing around, sure, and mud&#8217;s flying up in every damn direction, and you really can&#8217;t see where you&#8217;re going cuz it&#8217;s all up on the windshield and christ your dad&#8217;s gonna be pissed unless you can get it to a carwash before he sees it, but you&#8217;re not stuck-stuck; you&#8217;re moving, but it&#8217;s sluggish, and you&#8217;re starting to worry that if you keep going the way you&#8217;re going, you really WILL be stuck.<\/p>\n<p>You need a big goddamn boost to get out.<\/p>\n<p>Let&#8217;s talk about Bangs.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_2020\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2020\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/orange-bang.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-2020\" title=\"orange-bang\" src=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/orange-bang.jpg\" alt=\"Bang.\" width=\"500\" height=\"415\" srcset=\"https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/orange-bang.jpg 500w, https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/orange-bang-300x249.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2020\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Bang.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Those of you who&#8217;ve read <a href=\"http:\/\/random-average.com\/\">the stuff I write about gaming<\/a> have heard me talk about Bangs before, in the context of gaming.<\/p>\n<p>Put simply (and in writing rather than gaming terms), a &#8220;Bang&#8221; is when a scene introduces some sort of event or piece of information that <strong><em>requires<\/em><\/strong> a choice from one of your characters, and you don&#8217;t already know what they&#8217;re gonna choose.<\/p>\n<p>Let me break that criteria down one more time:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Something happens that cannot be ignored and which requires some sort of response.<\/li>\n<li>You&#8217;re not entirely sure what your protag is going to decide to do.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>And example from my NaNoWriMo project:<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;m at about 30k words. There&#8217;s been a lot of talking going on, and it&#8217;s time to shake stuff up a bit. Per my own advice, I <a href=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/index.php\/2009\/11\/nanowrimo-keep-calm-and-carry-on\/\">attack the scene with genre-appropriate ninjas<\/a>. This situations creates a Bang (fine: &#8220;decision point&#8221; if you must) for Finnras: <\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Return to the ship, where Deirdre is in danger from the G.A.N.s.<\/li>\n<li>Continue onward in pursuit of his daughter, abandoning Deirdre and other members of his crew to their own fate.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>A couple key things to pick up from this kind of event:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>It put things into motion.<\/li>\n<li>You learn something you didn&#8217;t know (or weren&#8217;t entirely sure of) about the character.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>These are both pretty good boosts for getting out of the muck, and they also have a fairly good chance of propelling the story in unexpected and interesting directions that will give you a boost of enthusiasm and energy &#8212; enough to power through to the end of the story. <\/p>\n<p>For reference, here are a couple types of Bangs I&#8217;ve used in the past, broken out with labels decreed by a Mike Holmes, from whom I learned a lot of this stuff.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Dilemma:<\/strong> This is like the example I mentioned from my current story. You just grab two Important Things and make up a situation that forces a decision between those two things. Finding the Important Things is pretty easy &#8211; take what you know or think you know about the character, pick two things that seem to be roughly equal in importance, and set up a situation where they have to pick between the two. <strong>Note:<\/strong> this sort of event <em>can<\/em> result in the character losing the thing they didn&#8217;t choose, but this isn&#8217;t <em>necessary<\/em>, and it might be better (read: more incredibly awkward and painful for the character at a later point in time) if that doesn&#8217;t happen.<\/p>\n<p>Be aware that you character may decide to pull a Batman and change the situation: they don&#8217;t accept that they can&#8217;t get one thing without losing the other, so they put a third thing at risk, trying to save both of the original things. This is awesome. Go with it.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Escalation:<\/strong> this is essentially hitting the same choice as a previous Dilemma, but upping the stakes. Basically, you take the unselected option from a previous dilemma and make it more important or more endangered. Let&#8217;s say Finn goes with &#8220;I have to follow my daughter,&#8221; because the threat to his crew isn&#8217;t that concrete and they&#8217;re actually pretty competent people.  In an escalation, I can come back to that later and set up a scene like &#8220;okay, the crew is now captured, and they&#8217;re totally gonna die\/go to jail for a million years\/vote republican&#8230; or you can go after your daughter.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Identity Crisis:<\/strong> Do I need an example of this? Really? Okay&#8230; <\/p>\n<blockquote><p>&#8220;Luke, I am your father.&#8221; <\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>There. Someone thinks they&#8217;re one thing, and they find out they&#8217;re something or someone else. Hit em with the Sith Lord Daddy and stand back to see what happens.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Something Totally Weird:<\/strong> Exactly what it sounds like. Something really weird happens which can&#8217;t be ignored because it&#8217;s so&#8230; weird. With no particular clue about a solution, what we learn about the character (hopefully) is how they try to address the event. <\/p>\n<p><strong>Ninja!<\/strong> So you&#8217;re kind of out of moral dilemmas, but you still need to get the action going. For this, I give the floor to Reverend Raymond Chandler: <\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Have somebody come in guns blazing, and figure out who they are later.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Does your guy fight or run? Do they freeze? Are there innocents to protect? Valuable stuff that needs to be kept from harm? Watch, learn, and write it down.<\/p>\n<p>Don&#8217;t have ninjas in your story? Dude, everyone has ninjas.<br \/>\n<figure id=\"attachment_2022\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2022\" style=\"width: 430px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/rodent.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/rodent.jpg\" alt=\"Mutant beaver ninjas.\" title=\"rodent\" width=\"430\" height=\"700\" class=\"size-full wp-image-2022\" srcset=\"https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/rodent.jpg 430w, https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/rodent-184x300.jpg 184w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 430px) 100vw, 430px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2022\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Mutant beaver ninjas.<\/figcaption><\/figure><\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_2023\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2023\" style=\"width: 153px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/u44.gif\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/u44.gif\" alt=\"Pervert Alient Ninjas.\" title=\"u44\" width=\"153\" height=\"400\" class=\"size-full wp-image-2023\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2023\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Pervert Alien Ninjas.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<figure id=\"attachment_2024\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2024\" style=\"width: 500px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/masks.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/masks.jpg\" alt=\"Doctor Ninjas. (Or possibly disease outbreak ninjas.)\" title=\"masks\" width=\"500\" height=\"323\" class=\"size-full wp-image-2024\" srcset=\"https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/masks.jpg 500w, https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/masks-300x193.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 500px) 100vw, 500px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2024\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Doctor Ninjas. (Or possibly disease outbreak ninjas.)<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<figure id=\"attachment_2021\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-2021\" style=\"width: 330px\" class=\"wp-caption aligncenter\"><a href=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/Dino_F-14s.png\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/Dino_F-14s.png\" alt=\"Not ninjas, but still awesome.\" title=\"Dino_F-14s\" width=\"330\" height=\"208\" class=\"size-full wp-image-2021\" srcset=\"https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/Dino_F-14s.png 330w, https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/wp\/wp-content\/uploads\/2009\/11\/Dino_F-14s-300x189.png 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 330px) 100vw, 330px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-2021\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Not ninjas, but still awesome.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>&#8230; and that&#8217;s it.<\/p>\n<p>Get back to work.<\/p>\n<p>Have fun.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>So here we are. Week Three, innit it? Bit of pain in the ass, this one. Some folks call it the wasteland. Some call it the weeds. I call it dirty things you wouldn&#8217;t call your wife, unless it was the Special &#8220;Diceless Roleplay&#8221; Weekend. Too much info? Right, moving on. It&#8217;d be easy for &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/doycetesterman.com\/index.php\/2009\/11\/nanowrimo-bang-with-ninjas\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;#NaNoWriMo: Bang! 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