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August 28th, 2009
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At the airlock. Burns says to knock some sense into Kaetlyn. I pause, then say I will. Burns hesitates. His eyes widen. Pausing was bad.

August 26th, 2009
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Burns motions for his people to leave. He looks at Deirdre, waiting. Long pause. I have to remind her she’s standing on one of his people.

August 25th, 2009
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I have zero doubt that, at some later point, Jon will refer to my artful dodging as ‘gracefully feminine’. I will retort by being not-dead.

August 25th, 2009
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My spasm was just a flinch, not a bullet impact. The shooter’s hand, still gripping the gun, is crushed to the deck beneath Deirdre’s boot.

August 24th, 2009
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I don’t hear the bang, i don’t think, but my body jerks all the same.

August 21st, 2009
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Guy raises his weapon, Burns is turning too late, and I don’t have a gun. My last thought: it’s okay – at least I’m dying on my own ship.

August 20th, 2009
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I should NEVER think thoughts like “this is going to work out.” The Universe can tell. So can the guy with the bleeding leg and the gun.

August 19th, 2009
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Burns shoots the loudest dissenter in the leg – an effective debate tactic, if a little inelegant. I think this is going to work out.

August 19th, 2009
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On one hand, dissent in the ranks is Burns’ problem (and, privately, kind of funny). On the other, this ‘dissent’ is pointing a gun at me.

August 17th, 2009
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The next hour goes sunburn-careful. Burns gives instructions. I act very agreeable. His people… don’t. Too many want a corpse of me. Hmm.