Comments on: Vayland Rd. [5] – The Quest http://doycetesterman.com/index.php/2010/02/vayland-rd-5-the-quest/ Perpetual projects and daily obsessions. Tue, 27 Jul 2010 01:59:53 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Doyce http://doycetesterman.com/index.php/2010/02/vayland-rd-5-the-quest/comment-page-1/#comment-3882 Doyce Mon, 08 Feb 2010 16:49:30 +0000 http://doycetesterman.com/?p=2526#comment-3882 Still not 100% happy with the scene blocking at the end of the scene, but whatever. It'll do. Still not 100% happy with the scene blocking at the end of the scene, but whatever. It’ll do.

]]> By: Doyce http://doycetesterman.com/index.php/2010/02/vayland-rd-5-the-quest/comment-page-1/#comment-3881 Doyce Mon, 08 Feb 2010 16:46:21 +0000 http://doycetesterman.com/?p=2526#comment-3881 Cut about 300 words out of this section: a brief summary of the history of the shelterbelt in the midwest (fascinating stuff, oh yeah); a bit about how noisy the 'quiet' of the country is, and a longer bit on how many stars you can see when you're truly away from city lights. All of it very 'me', but irrelevant to the story. Cut about 300 words out of this section: a brief summary of the history of the shelterbelt in the midwest (fascinating stuff, oh yeah); a bit about how noisy the ‘quiet’ of the country is, and a longer bit on how many stars you can see when you’re truly away from city lights.

All of it very ‘me’, but irrelevant to the story.

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