Comments on: Vayland Rd. [3] – The Cage http://doycetesterman.com/index.php/2010/02/vayland-rd-3-the-cage/ Perpetual projects and daily obsessions. Fri, 03 Feb 2012 13:51:47 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: Doyce http://doycetesterman.com/index.php/2010/02/vayland-rd-3-the-cage/comment-page-1/#comment-3858 Doyce Sat, 06 Feb 2010 16:12:56 +0000 http://doycetesterman.com/?p=2517#comment-3858 Also, in Steven's first appearance in the story, I call him Sam. No idea why. Also, in Steven’s first appearance in the story, I call him Sam. No idea why.

]]> By: Doyce http://doycetesterman.com/index.php/2010/02/vayland-rd-3-the-cage/comment-page-1/#comment-3857 Doyce Sat, 06 Feb 2010 15:31:12 +0000 http://doycetesterman.com/?p=2517#comment-3857 This one stayed pretty much the same length, but the order of events rearranged itself quite a bit. Don't know exactly what to say about this, except that in working on the scenes written from Steven's point of view, my main goal was to tweak the descriptions to use the sorts of words Steven would use -- to see things as constrained by his particular vocabulary, which isn't Sean's or mine. This one stayed pretty much the same length, but the order of events rearranged itself quite a bit.

Don’t know exactly what to say about this, except that in working on the scenes written from Steven’s point of view, my main goal was to tweak the descriptions to use the sorts of words Steven would use — to see things as constrained by his particular vocabulary, which isn’t Sean’s or mine.

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