Comments on: Vayland Rd. [1] – The Call

By: The story behind Vayland Rd. – doyce testerman

The story behind Vayland Rd. – doyce testerman — Fri, 12 Feb 2010 12:43:59 +0000

[...] The Call [...]

By: ajcap

ajcap — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 21:42:36 +0000

Yes, that little intro is definitely a hooker.

And now Sean’s dad is missing. I have no choice but to read the next scene.

By: Doyce

Doyce — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 19:16:45 +0000

I’m probably going to have to come back to this after I’ve reached the end and clean it up yet again. I’m kind of fumbling a bit with how to clean up the pacing and getting things moving along at a good clip, but rather than taking things out, I’m putting stuff in.

Still, I like the rapport I (at least) can feel between Sean and his mom. He knows her pretty well, even if they’re quite physically separated, and I like that.

And I’ve always liked that little intro.